My First Blog

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I decided to write a blog tonight
But couldn’t think what to say
(It’s not usually such a big problem -
I can normally blather all day!)

So I thought I’d do something different
And try my hand at a rhyme
(Not too sure if it’s working
But hey, I’m new, give me time!)

My garden, I find it quite lovely
So soothing, so pretty, so bright
I’m far from an expert, believe me
But striving to get it just right

I’m sure that Growsonyou members
Will be there to lend me a hand
And offer advice when I need it
Which is likely to be quite often really, cos I need all the help I can get.

(Well I couldn’t think of a rhyme for hand!)

24 Jun, 2009
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Comments

Bobg

Well thats different, a nice poem, very sophisticated, Thankyou Jan I enjoyed that and so what if you couldnt think of a rhyme for hand it works for me :o)))

24 Jun, 2009

Kmccue07

I bet you could of worked land in there some how LOL after all isn't that what we do...work the land.
VERY nice for your first blog.

24 Jun, 2009

Mobee

pretty good piece of poetry there Jan something different really enjoyed reading it thanks!!! :~)

24 Jun, 2009

Louise1

Lovely Jan :)

25 Jun, 2009

Jacque

Its a Great Jan :) Thanx 4 sharing :)

25 Jun, 2009

Lily2

Your very first blog is a good one
I've tried to reply in rhyme
But I need to go and sit in the sun
Cos it's going to take a long time

25 Jun, 2009

Donnah

great poem

25 Jun, 2009

Pondlady

that was a great poem

25 Jun, 2009

Jan65

Thank you everyone, was a bit nervous about writing my first blog as I wasn't sure I had anything interesting to say!

25 Jun, 2009

Louise1

Likewise and it's still a mini thrill when people actually respond/reply to me !

25 Jun, 2009

Lily2

Me too. There's always the horrible thought that no-one will respond!

25 Jun, 2009

Louise1

I know !!!!

25 Jun, 2009

Jan65

So do I! Thanks again to all who did!

25 Jun, 2009

Bigbumblebee

Well done Jan. I enjoyed that. Very original for a first blog.
Bbb

25 Jun, 2009

Clarice

Loved your poem Jan.

25 Jun, 2009

Neellan

Liked your poem and chuckled at your last line thought that a nice touch
hope you enjoy GOY and blog some more don't feel obliged to do them all in rhyme or you'll have no time to garden!!!
Enjoy your gardening
regards
neellan

25 Jun, 2009

Blodyn

Nice blog. I enjoyed it. I've written a few in rhyme aswell. Sometimes it was easy and sometimes difficult. Well done on your first blog. :o)

25 Jun, 2009